Here we are again at Wednesday. Not quite as good as last week because I'm back in work and it's bloody cold but hey I'm alive, relatively well and writing. What more can anyone want.
These are two of the photo prompts this week. They have nothing to do with the story I've written but I loved them so much I just had to put them in :)
The prompt I actually used was - something to do with Cher. Brownie points for finding it :)
Passa’el was in agony. He writhed on the ground, oblivious
to everything but the pain. It was far more than he would have had just from
falling on his back in the dust. What did it mean? Oh God, what did it mean?
Fighting the pain he dragged himself to his knees. He was surrounded by people
who were trying to help him. He wanted to scream at them. All he cared about
was Uzzi’el. What was happening to him? Had Micha’el pulled the trigger before
Uzzi’el blasted him? Where was the pain coming from? Was it from Uzzi’el.
As he got to his feet, the pain faded and he was able to
stagger across the courtyard, thrusting people out of his way, until he got to
the little knot of people who surrounded Uzzi’el. Breaking through, he fell to
his knees and almost passed out when Uzzi’el raised his hand and grabbed
Passa’el’s, holding it tight. A quick scan reassured Passa’el there was no
blood.
“I’m sorry I hurt you. Are you alright?”
“I am now; now I know you’re okay.”
“Okay is such a relative word. I hurt like all hell.”
“Me too. What happened?”
“I think I drew in too much energy, and I didn’t account for
the backlash.”
“What do you mean?”
Uzzi’el groaned as he and Passa’el helped each other to
their feet. “I didn’t realise that when I threw all that energy at Micha’el the
force of his deconstruction would surge back on me, on us.”
“Deconstruction?”
“Yes.”
“What do you mean?”
“I mean that I deconstructed him. I did to him what he was
going to do to you when you were in his hands. He is gone, his atoms scattered
and reabsorbed by the life force of the universe.”
“He’s gone? It’s over?” Uzzi’el nodded but another voice
interrupted.
“It’s not quite over yet. There is something you should
see.”
The speaker, a woman in a red dress who Passa’el recognized
slightly, took Uzzi’el’s arm and drew him away. Passa’el, of course, followed.
A little way away another knot of people stood around,
staring at something on the ground. The woman pushed them out of the way.
Passa’el gasped when he saw what it was. Uzzi’el pulled away from both of them
and threw himself to his knees.
“Gabri’el.”
Gabri’el’s eyes fluttered and opened. He looked totally
shocked.
“He…he was going to….” He stopped, choking on his words.
Blood was trickling from the corner of his mouth. “He…jumped a guard. He had a
gun and he….” He choked again. He was going to shoot you.”
“You…you stepped in front of a gun? You took a bullet? For
me? Why?”
“Because….” Gabri’el gasped as a spasm of pain shook him.
“Whatever you think I always…. I always…loved…you.”
“You loved me? You truly loved me?”
“Enough to…to…. Enough to die for. Oh dear God.” Gabri’el
clasped Uzzi’el’s hand and brought it close to his chest, pressing it against
the blood soaked shirt. “I’m dying, Uzzy. I’m dying.”
Tears splashed on their entwined hands as Uzzi’el stared into
Gabri’el’s face. “Yes,” he whispered.
“I’m scared, Uzzy. I never thought….”
“No. Neither did I.”
“I wish…. I wish I’d had a chance to prove….to show…. I wish
I could have shown you how much I love you. If I could turn back time….”
“I know. Now I know.”
“If I could have…. I thought…. Everything I did…I thought it
was for the best. I thought I was doing the right thing…for us. I never
thought…. I thought… I thought that when it was over, when everything had
settled you’d realise how much I love you, how I only ever had the best at
heart. I thought we’d…. that…. that….” Pain stole his words and he coughed
thick blood over his chest. “Uzzy,” he cried in panic.
Uzzi’el was panicking too, Passa’el could feel it. As much
as he’s despised Gabri’el it was terrible to see him in so much pain and it was
clear that he really did love Uzzi’el in his own way. Without prompting,
Passa’el reached out for the rainbow energy and carefully shaped it before
letting it leak slowly into Gabri’el, soothing his pain and fear.
Gabri’el’s beautiful blue eyes slid past Uzzi’el to light on
Passa’el in shock. “You….” he whispered. “You…help…why?”
“Because he’s my world.” He knew he had no need to say more,
so he didn’t.
Gabri’el nodded and tried to say something but he couldn’t.
As Passa’el watched a spasm of pain sent a deep shudder through his body. He
took one, deep breath and then his eyes glazed and his hand slipped from
Uzzi’el’s.
“No,” Uzzi’el cried. “Gabriel, no.”
Passa’el gripped his shoulder and continued to carefully
pour the energy into Gabri’el. At some point, Uzzi’el must have realised what
he was doing, because he gasped and looked up into his eyes. He wanted to
smile, but he was too deep into the process.
Eventually, when he was confident, he’d poured in enough
energy and he thought he could see Gabri’el’s body shimmering slightly, he
severed the connection and stepped back. Uzzi’el threw his arms around him and
hugged him tight. “Thank you,” he whispered.
“You told me I’m not the one who kills. You took Micha’el’s
life and I….”
Gasps from the watching crowd snapped their attention back
to Gabri’el, except he wasn’t there anymore. His empty clothes lay, just bloody
rags on the ground, a shimmering mist of rainbow colours slowly rising from
them. All eyes followed the mist upwards to where it gathered to make a
semi-solid image of an angel, his wings spread behind him. The angel was
beautiful, its face serene. The lips curved into a smile, then the wings
shivered and the figure rose like a bullet into the clear sky.
“What happens now?” Uzzi’el asked, his eyes still on the
sky.
“He’ll go home. We’ll meet again one day soon.”
“No,” Uzzi’el said, turning back to Passa’el, “I meant with
us.”
Okay folks, now take some time to check out my fellow flashers
How beautiful and sad.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Yes, it was sad. I always suspected that Gabri'el loved Uzzy in his own way. At least he redeemed himself in the end. And now we're left with Uzzy and Pasha. Where will the go from here. Not sure I know :)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you gave Gabri'el his redemption and not just because I'm a big fan of redemption stories. It's also such a lovely contrast, a mirror image really, of Micha'el's utter failure and dissolution. One saved, one lost. A balance, if you will. :)
ReplyDeleteThat was definitely in my mind. Balance. Uzzy takes life and Pasha gives it. Michael was lost and Gabriel redeemed. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when they meet again. not sure if that will be in this story or not. it has a feeling of coming to an end so i don't know how much story these two now have to tell.
DeleteOh no! You're going soft on us! That was all love an rainbows, literally :) I loved that...a surprise from gabriel and it showed Pasha's true nature in what he did. What happens to the angels who just die? They just come back as humans?
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For a moment I thought Gabriel had concocted some terrible plan. It was really sad the way he died. Looking forward to next week when Passa'el answers Uzzy's question.
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