Today, I'm lucky enough to be hosting an old (she's not old, I am :) ) friend Alicia (Cia) Nordwell. I've loved everything I've ever read of hers and this is no exception. The story started off as one of our Wednesday Flashes and grew from there. Bear's a sweetheart, and well worth protecting. His story is well worth reading.
Oh, is it the best for last? Nephy’s kind enough to host me for the final day of my blog hop. Thanks Nephy! Don’t forget to check out the new excerpt and comment for your last chance to win the $10 Amazon gift card. Contest ends at midnight! The winner will be chosen randomly from the commenters and then announced on the final stop back at my blog tomorrow. Don’t forget to leave your email, or I won’t be able to contact you.
Passing
on the Plot
I’ve
written a lot about Bear and Kameron this last week. I thought today I’d share
one of the major ways the plot changed too. You already saw the new beginning.
Kameron’s part in the story became far more overt, but I also changed a few
other events too, including the ending to some extent. Now, as I was asked in a
previous stop, I didn’t do away with the happily ever after. I’m too much of a
sucker for them myself.
Other
things changed though. I’m sure everyone remembers Vilem… our backstabbing bad
boy ex-boyfriend who screwed Bear over. This time around I went a little more
explicit on what happens with him and there’s a lot of new content regarding
him and the drugs Choika’s looking for.
Of
course I can’t tell you everything or the major fun part of the eBook would be
revealed! If you haven’t already read the eBook, I would hate to spoil it. For
now, enjoy the excerpt and I’ll see you on my blog tomorrow to announce the
winner!
Synopsis: Bear has horrible luck with guys. Kameron seems like a good
guy, but Bear thought his ex was a good guy too. He turned out to be a drug
dealer. Kameron isn't who Bear thinks he is, though, and Vilem's enemies are
looking for Bear. They want to… talk.
Excerpt: Casually, over their hot dogs, Bear decided to deal with
Kameron’s distraction. His constant fidgeting was worse than usual, and Bear
knew that there was something on his mind that Kameron was reluctant to talk
about. Normally the man inhaled his food, needing a large amount of food to
keep that big body moving… and damn could he make it move. “So, did your
partner have any news for us?”
Kameron’s mouth dropped
open again.
“Ew, man, I didn’t need to
see that. Swallowing is important, very important.” Bear smirked. Kameron
flushed. “You really think I didn’t realize you were going out every other day
around dinner time to pick up food, and come back with a little wrinkle in your
forehead?”
Kameron frowned.
“Yeah, that one,” Bear
said.
“I just need to know
what’s going on.” Kameron wiped his mouth. “The phone is a burner purchased
with cash. I never call from the same place or too close to the
apartment.”
Bear nodded. “I know
you’re being safe. I like the idea of having someone to fall back on for
information, too. Jimmy’s still out of commission, and the last time the
captain called all she would say was to sit tight. It’s frustrating when you’re
kept in the dark, even for you own protection.” Bear wasn’t above getting that
dig in. Kameron winced. “Did he have anything to say? Have they found Choika’s
drugs?”
“No.” Kameron cleared his
throat. “Actually… Vilem was shanked in prison. He might not make it.”
Vilem could be dying. Bad
guy or not, Bear hadn’t expected to Kameron to say he’d been stabbed. His hot
dog fell from numb fingers. “I… he what?”
“One of the Zbrane inmates
got him during the transfer from his cell to the bus. He was scheduled to go
before the grand jury.”
Icy chills washed over
Bear. His mouth was incredibly dry, so he reached for his drink. His hand
shook, and he tipped over his glass of soda. Bear watched the spreading stain,
unable to move. In his mind the stain wasn't soda, it was blood.
Their blood.
Kameron bolted out of his
seat and knelt beside him, pulling Bear into his arms. Bear wrapped his arms
around Kameron’s chest and held on, trying to stop the waves of panic. He shook
his head, grabbing Kameron's shirt and holding on tight.
His ribs protested when
Kameron pulled him out of the chair and onto his lap on the floor.
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I've really loved seeing some of the new tidbits on the blog tour. Looking forward to reading this.
ReplyDeletesabrinasmadrina@gmail.com
Hm, I'm glad I didn't read the earlier version of this story. Because As much as I would try NOT to, I would compare too many things to the original and it kills the story for me.
ReplyDeleteBut, because I haven't, eek!! <3 This all sounds absolutely fantastic! I want to read it so bad! lol...
Judi P
arella3173_loveless@yahoo(dot)com
Love all your stories. Read Protecting Bear and thought it was fantastic. Pre-ordered the experiment and waiting to be able to download it. Please enter me in the GC giveaway. Thank you. :)
ReplyDeletemarsh10@netzero.com
And again, all I can say is keep writing and I promise to keep reading. I've loved everything I've read of yours, so far. :-)
ReplyDeleteLoving the changes so far. Looking forward to reading the story and see what all you've added or changed.
ReplyDeletesstrode at scrtc dot com
Looking forward to reading the revamped version.
ReplyDeletedreamseeker331(at)gmail(dot)com
Thank you everyone! It's been a lot of work, but I'm so glad the story came out the way it did. Thanks again for commenting and following the hop! You're all entered into the contest. The winner will be announced on my blog tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteI can see why Bear would be shaken, not easy hearing someone you know near death after someone stabs him.
ReplyDeletestrive4bst(AT) yahoo(Dot) com
Nice to meet you, Alicia. I live in the inland Northwest, so we're kinda neighbors...
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