TITLE: Locked
SERIES: Telluric Realm #1
AUTHOR: Anyta Sunday
COVER ARTIST: Natasha Snow
LENGTH: 98,000 words
RELEASE DATE: April 26, 2016
BLURB: A curse threatens the Winter Kingdom.
A brother is turned to ice.
A rebel uprising is on the horizon.
Marble-maker Rye Cunnings is at the center of it all—and doesn’t know it.
He doesn’t know he’s the lost summer prince. Doesn’t know his blood can unlock Winter’s curse. Doesn’t know why the marbles he makes flutter with magic. All he thinks is that he’s crazy. That he sees things others don’t, like dragons and strange markings on his skin.
But when a dark dragon snatches away Rye’s only friend Milo, he is forced to face the crazy in his life and figure out a way to bring Milo back.
Help comes in the form of Cerdic Leit, a warrior who finds Rye to take him “home” to the Telluric Realm and their kind. All Rye has to do is follow him into Gatreau, the gateway to the four Telluric kingdoms, and all his questions will be answered.
In the hopes of saving Milo, Rye steps into this new and dangerous world. A world where he learns of the Tellurics and their Hansian foes. A world that is swept up in a bitter battle of justice and hate.
And a world that won’t let Rye leave again.
Rye Cunnings shivered and hoofed it down the
cobblestone road, fixed on the slice of his marble store ahead. This was just
another morning. Just another morning.
A drizzly dawn fingered through the low-hanging mist
creeping along Bristol’s narrow streets. Lamppost lights flickered and blinked
out, sucking their murky reflections from deep puddles. Rain hit Rye’s neck and
face and the palm he pressed against his chest. The drops snaked down his
sleeve and mixed with the blood at his wrist. It tingled, and Rye dabbed his
cuff over the cut—a circle intersected with twelve loops.
A cut that he’d gouged out with his keys, following
the shimmery pattern that had marked his skin for as long as he could remember.
Mist lurked over the Marvel Marbles store sign,
thickening over the tattoo parlor and barber cushioning it on either side.
Inside was safe. He just needed to get inside.
He jogged over the road for the bright blue door
beckoning him home. Each step jarred through his body to his aching head. He
just needed to touch one of the marbles he made.
Key in his good hand, he sank it into the lock and
twisted until the bar snapped back.
A figure prowled out from the shelter of the parlor
entrance.
Rye choked back a gasp, then let out a relieved
laugh. Milo. Just Milo.
“Stealthy as a cat, you are.”
“Purrrrrr.”
Milo smirked and slunk to his side, raindrops
weaving through day-old stubble to the cleft in his chin. He studied Rye and
lifted an eyebrow. “And where’ve you been?”
Doesn’t
matter. Get inside!
Rye feigned nonchalance. “A walk.” A drug-induced, crazy person one. “Just
a walk.”
He beckoned Milo inside, but he tilted his chin
skyward and let the rain fall on his face. A small smile played at his lips.
“And a mighty good morning for one. Fresh, today is. Invigorating. Where’d ya
go?”
Where? Where he always regained consciousness: the
local cemetery at the church ruin. Every week the same time, the same place,
and always surrounded by a sea of daisies. “Just . . . about.”
Clouds rippled, growing darker. Rye sucked in
sharply, grabbed Milo’s arm and steered him inside. He shut the door and sank back
against the glass.
Milo strutted through the store, running fingers
over jars of comets, cat’s eyes, peacocks and milky ways. Hundreds of jars
filled the shelves on his walls. Sparklers, corkscrews, aces. Hundreds of
colors glittered without light. Aquamarine, butterscotch yellow, magenta, and
every shade in between.
Rye caught his breath and let the colors calm him.
In a couple of hours the grandfather clock tucked between shelves would chime
nine and kids would press their noses to the window and fog the glass as they
took in the wonder of his store. The day would whip by with smiles and
laughter. Then it’ll be sundown again, thank
God.
Milo faced him, casting a look at his mud-crusted
jeans. Rye tucked his bloodstained sleeve behind him. “You look like
regurgitated hell, pudding.”
“And you wonder why I never let you into my bed.”
“You couldn’t handle me, love.”
Rye gripped the wooden “shut” sign as he peered
through the rain-splotched glass to the sky. Milo came to his side, staring out
the window with him.
“A bad sign, huh?”
Rye startled. “What?”
“The weather. Means less customers, right?”
“Customers. Right.” His head pounded, his teeth
ached. A marble. He needed one now. He shifted away from the windows but Milo
planted a forearm on his shoulder.
“You seem on edge, Rye. Lock up for the morning.
We’ll go out.”
Out?
He shook his head. “Not today.”
A dark shape darted behind the gaps in the clouds. A
shiver scuttled down Rye’s spine and he stepped back. Milo moved with him,
oblivious to the danger that lurked out there.
“I need to make marbles,” Rye croaked.
“What you need is a day off, friend.”
“Haven’t made a marble in two days.”
“We could go to the carnival, hop on the Ferris
wheel. Might even see above these clouds today.”
“How about some green tea?”
Milo pulled away, and Rye scampered across the store
to his special marbles behind the counter.
“All right,” Milo said. “I’m going to be a bloody
wanker and just say it: you don’t have a social life, mate. You never party. No
one visits.”
“I’ve plenty of—”
“Customers don’t count.” Milo skulked closer. “Far
as I can see, I’m the only friend you have. And that makes you one hell of a
poor bastard.”
A sharp pang shot up Rye’s temple and he hissed, and
scanned the middle shelf. He withdrew the largest jar, uncorked it, and dunked
his fingers into the mass of silver swirls. Relief fingered up his arms,
soothing the pain in his head and the ache from Milo’s advice.
He pocketed a marble.
Over the counter, Milo pointed at Rye’s bloodstained
sleeve. “What happened, then?”
Rye resisted the urge to stare at his wrist. The cut
never stayed long, would be nothing but faintly-scarred lines by now. Opening
the door to his kitchen and marble-making workshop, he threw a hurried lie over
his shoulder.
“It’s nothing. Had a raspberry smoothie.”
In the kitchen nook before his workshop, Rye picked
up a half-filled pot of tea. Behind him came the clacking of boots, then a hand
clamped over his shoulder, urging him around. Cold tea spilled out of the
nozzle to the floor between them.
“What are you—?”
Milo pushed up Rye’s sleeve and revealed the
circular scar, traced with dry blood. “How exactly did you have that raspberry smoothie?”
“Y-you wouldn’t understand.”
“Don’t underestimate me, I have vast, comprehendy
abilities.”
Rye’s throat was tight. “I’m crazy, Milo.
Certifiable.” He lifted the pot. “Green tea?”
Milo gently drew his black-painted nails around and
over the mark. “You and green bloody tea.” He pulled Rye’s sleeve down. “I’ll
have a cuppa.”
With a shaky hand, Rye poured them both a cup. Milo
pinched his nose, downed his tea, and set the cup in the sink. “Ugh.”
Rye sipped his, then put it down. It didn’t settle
his churning stomach.
“Now make me a marble, friend,” Milo said with a
wink, and took out the pendant hanging under his shirt. “One with a bit of me
in it.” He snapped off a thin corner and handed Rye the tiny wedge.
Rye stared at the piece on his palm. So small, so
horribly scratched, and yet it warmed his entire hand. He clamped his fingers
over it.
“Got any cash?”
“Put it on my tab.”
“I love it when I do work and no one pays me.” He
moved into his workshop and Milo followed behind.
“Reminds me of my last foster
home.”
“Said so dryly. That’s exactly why I like you.” Milo
flung himself on the stained brown couch at the flank of the room and slipped
his hands behind his head. “I’ll lie here and share my woeful problems while
you warm your glory hole. God, I love
marbling.”
Rye tossed a fiber blanket at him. “I work with a
torch.”
“Go on then, light up. Make magic.”
Swallowing, Rye glanced at Milo, who stared at the
ceiling with half-lidded eyes. Make
magic. He’d thought the same thing himself a thousand times. The way his
marbles soothed his anxiety, or seemed to open locked doors, or throbbed warmly
in his grip like they held secrets of who he was—what he was.
“I don’t make magic,” Rye said carefully.
Milo turned his head, waggling his brows. “Marvel
me, then. Make me a nicer set of balls than I already have. Or better yet, make
a marble that solves all my problems.”
“Such as cockiness?”
“Don’t go messing with anything starting with cock. All else is fair play.”
“Your assery it is then.”
Milo snorted.
“Entertain me with these oh-so woeful problems.” Make me forget mine.
“I’m too smart for my own good,” Milo said with a
smirk. “And it’s going to cost me.”
“So dramatic.”
Milo looked pointedly toward Rye’s wrist.
“Point taken,” Rye said.
Milo’s phone rang and he swung off the couch. “You
get to making that marble,” he said, ducking through the door. “I’ll be back.”
Rye took a sparkly gold glass rod from the jars on
the shelf, bumping the small velvet pouch of marble monstrosities at the end.
They’d been Milo’s attempts at marbling, pockmarked and pitiful. Yet he’d not
brought himself to throw them away. They called to him with a magic of their
own, the magic of a hundred shared laughs between them. Laughs that had been
few-and-far-between before Milo had come into his life a year ago.
Rye set the melting glass next to the wedge of
pendant. What style did Milo want? Did he wish his marble to glitter? To glow?
To be dotted with silver?
He listened for Milo and was met with nothing but
the creaking of his store door. Where had Milo gone to take his call? Rye
shuffled to the kitchen. Empty. He checked the store.
“Milo?”
A breeze swept through the room. The front door was
partially open and rain was pooling at the floor. Had Milo taken his call
outside? Or had he left, like sometimes he did, without so much as a goodbye?
At the store window, Rye looked outside. The cloud
had thickened. It hung low over shop roofs and gutters, only a few feet above
the three umbrella-toting pedestrians huddled at the bus stop. Milo was
strutting down the middle of the street toward the store, ash blond and soaked.
Rye waved.
The cloud burst, plumes pelting toward the ground,
and a large winged body swooped down the street toward them.
Dragon.
Rye’s heart seized in his chest; he jerked his
bloodied arm across his face and peered at the beast again, at its long snout,
horns, and black scales, the arrowhead tail snaking behind it, whipping up
gusts. The dragon dipped and umbrellas jerked, inverting into black poppies.
Their owners laughed.
Rye ached to be one of those men, ignorant of the
terror flying over them, of the dragon stretching its forelegs, clawed talons
aimed at—
Milo!
Rye tried to shout but his voice was lost in the
tight clutch of his throat.
The dragon whipped past the window. Wind surged and
the door banged against the wall shelves, smashing a jar, glass shards and red
marbles raining to the floor.
Rye shrank back into the shadows, shaking as the
dragon snatched his friend and lifted into the clouds. Words echoed in his
head, soft, placating…
Shhh. He won’t get you.
An intriguing, and thought provoking book.
The basic story is fairly simple. In
a world linked with ours four ruling families – winter, summer, autumn and spring – are required to provide a blood
sacrifice (small one) from one of their ruling family every day. If they can’t
their power will fail and our seasons will go awry (maybe that’s what’s
happening right now). Upon the Winter King kidnapping the Summer King’s son,
the Summer King put a spell on the Winter royal heirs that if they have any
sexual contact with another the lover turns to ice. The only way to break the
curse is to have someone from the Summer Royal family remove it. If the curse
is not removed the royal line dies out and so does winter. A captain of the
royal guard, who happens to be a dragon shifter, is sent to our world to find
and return the Winter Prince, knowing that the prince will die to remove the
curse.
On the whole, the book was extremely entertaining.
There was a lot of originality in the world and its people with complex, well
drawn characters and plotline. I loved the poor, clueless summer prince who
things he’s losing his mind with vague memories of dragons and strange markings
on his body that seem to mean something. He has a fixation with marbles and one
of my favourite scenes from the book is where he makes one.
There are so many lovely scenes that are drawn
beautifully and move the book on at what feels like a fairly leisurely pace, which
is in no way a criticism. Even when exciting things are happening there is
still time to look around and appreciate the beauty of the surroundings.
I have two very small criticisms. The first few
chapters had me a bit confused. That, in itself is nothing unusual, but the
whole issue of keys was frustratingly confusing until they were explained more
than a quarter of the way through the book. I am not a fan of info dumps but I
would have liked a little more explanation earlier.
Secondly, especially given how fearful Rye was
at the beginning, I think he reacted and adjusted to the new world a little too
easily.
That being said, I absolutely and utterly adored this book. I found myself thinking about it days after I finished it and there are nuances that only come out after reflection. Just who are the good guys and who are the bad guys here? The characters are vivid and unique, including the 'villains', the world building is masterful, the dialogue is fluid and the descriptions are delicate and evocative.
I totally and absolutely without hesitation recommend this book to anyone who likes fantasy, or is looking for something that little bit different.
I totally and absolutely without hesitation recommend this book to anyone who likes fantasy, or is looking for something that little bit different.
A born and raised New Zealander from Wellington, I’ve been exploring the literary world since I started reading Roald Dahl as a kid. Stories have been piling up in my head ever since. Fast forward to my mid-twenties and jump a few countries (Germany, America, and back again), I started to put them to paper.
My genre of choice is romance, both adult and YA, gay and straight. You can take a closer look at my books, available as e-books for download in many formats!
When I’m not pushing my characters deeper into adventure, I chase my son around the house and fight my two comical cats for the desk chair.
Since 2014, I’m also part of CritShop Literary Services, specializing in writing workshops and editorial services for LGBT fiction.
Winner’s Prize: E-copy of Locked
No comments:
Post a Comment