This week the prompts were
"It was a dark and stormy night" (so it's Bulmer-Lytton, sue me lol)
or the alternative prompts are:
candy, crow, a length of rope
or
"When I saw his/her eyes, I just knew that..."
or
French kiss, French fry, third French object of your choice
or
penguin, ventriloquist, rapier
or
"Are you glad to see me or is that a (fill in the blank) in your pocket?"
“Fucking HELL,” Luke yelled,
leaping off Rio, who also scrambled to his feet, this time not running but
standing, cowering.
Luke knelt beside Rune, afraid to
touch him. This time, there were no fluttering eyelashes. There was nothing at
all. Terrified, Luke pressed his fingers to Rune’s wrist. He had no idea how to
take a pulse and could find nothing.
Desperate, he pressed his ear to
Rune’s chest. He almost passed out when he heard the thump of his heart. To
him, it seemed faint and far away, but he didn’t know if that was normal or
not.
“Rune,” he called, softly, brushing
the pale hair out of his face. “Rune, please, you’re scaring the fuck out of
me. Please just have fainted. Please wake up now. For fuck sake, Rune – please,”
he moaned in anguish, but he may as well have been talking to the chair. “Don’t
just stand there,” he screamed at Rio. “DO something.”
“What the hell am I supposed to
do?”
“I don’t know. Phone an ambulance,
or something.”
“Look, there’s no need for that.
He’ll be alright. The little bitch is probably faking anyway – he’s like that.”
Luke gaped. “Are you real? Look at
him. He’s right out of it. If you think you can wake him, by all means give it
your best shot.” Rio shrank back, eyeing Rune as if he expected him to spit
poison. “Just ring for the fucking ambulance, Rio. I swear to God, if he— if
anything happens to him, I’ll rip your heart out.”
“Yeah, right,” Rio sneered.
“Just fucking do it.” Luke was
blazing mad and itching to lay hands on Rio, but he had more important things
to think about. He was afraid to move Rune, so he knelt on the floor, talking
to him, begging him, holding his hand, which seemed to be getting colder and
colder. Or maybe that was Luke’s.
“You’re off your rocker,” Rio
sneered, “talking to him. As if he’d know.”
“Five minutes ago you were saying
he’s faking it.”
“Yeah… well.”
They lapsed into silence. Rio
lounged against the sideboard and watched in silence, while Luke remained
kneeling on the floor
“Make the most of it,” Rio said
after a time, “because you won’t be doing it for long.”
“What?” Luke was startled. He’d
been stroking Rune’s hair, still talking to him softly.
“You won’t be getting anywhere near
him once we’re at the hospital.”
“What? What do you mean?”
“Think about it,” Rio said, with a
smirk. “I’m his husband and what are you? Nothing. Not even a friend. You’ve
only known him for a couple of days. Who do you think is going to be getting
all the news and sitting at the bedside?” He narrowed his eyes, a nasty little
smile on his face. “And who do you think-- won’t be?”
“You wouldn’t,” Luke gasped, his
eyes wide, incredulous.
Rio’s smiled widened, happy that
he’d nettled Luke. “Watch me. My face is the first think poor little Rune is
going to see when he wakes up and he’s going to be so sad that his new best
friend couldn’t be bothered to stick around.”
Luke stared at him for a few
minutes, anger flooding him – then he sighed and shook his head. “Tell me… Do
you care about him at all? Did you ever?”
“What?” Now it was Rio’s turn to
look confused.
“Did you ever care for him, or was
it all about possession and control?”
“I don’t know what you’re talking
about,” Rio said defensively, shuffling his feet. “I married him, didn’t I?”
“Yes, you did. You also broke his
ankle. You though it would mean he wouldn’t be able to dance anymore. When you
found out that, despite your best efforts he’d pulled himself up and was making
a new life and a new career, you just couldn’t leave him alone. You had to
spoil it for him. You took away his friends, his career, his dancing,
everything that meant anything to him… and you hurt him. You made him believe no
one else would want him, and you abused him.”
“That fucking bitch!” Rio spat,
looking as if he was about to kick Rune. “I don’t know what the fuck he’s been
telling you, but…”
“He hasn’t been telling me
anything, at least not about that. He’s so bloody naïve, it never crossed his
mind you were doing any of it. I think he still loves you in some kind of
twisted way – at least he wants to. And he wants to believe you love him. But I
don’t think you do. I don’t think you ever did. You just wanted to possess him,
to spoil everything for him.”
Rio glared for a moment, then
turned his eyes away, looking uncomfortably. “That’s not true. I did love him.
I do.”
“Then why are you trying so hard to
hurt him?”
“I’m not.”
“Oh come on. I know you’re not
naïve and I’m sure as hell not. I saw you do it and I’m not blind and I’m not
stupid. I know he’s scared of you. Is that what you really want? Someone who
stays with you because they’re scared of you? Someone you love?”
“He’s not…” Rio said, fading to a
halt. He actually looked shocked, a sad expression creeping into his eyes, as
he looked at Rune. It was the first honest expression Luke had seen on his
face.
As the sound of sirens sliced the
air outside, however, Rio sneered. “So what? It doesn’t change a thing.”
“Rio, please don’t hurt him
anymore. You know it’s me he wants. You know…”
“I know one thing.”
“What?”
“He’s mine. When I first saw his
eyes I just knew I had to have him, and I do; I do have him. He’s always been
mine and he always will be mine and it’ll take more than a snivelling fool,
who’s only known him for five minutes, to take him away from me.”
Now, don't forget to go check out the rest of our flashers. You've got a great choice this week
ARGH...More please. I love this story.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Don't worry, there will be more next week
ReplyDeleteLOVE the passion! Mmm, I think someone's going to have a broken heart! I can't wait to read next week!
ReplyDeleteDoes Rio HAVE a heart? Must be Luke or Rune then. One of them is going to have a shock, that's for sure. Thanks for the comment hun
ReplyDeleteAw man, I just want to kick Rio's ass sooooooo bad! Great chapter, even if I am crying lol
ReplyDeleteI know there's more cause you told me lol
Poor Rio. He's in for a bad time.
ReplyDeleteIntense stuff, Wow.
ReplyDeleteOh yes, another edgy story of yours! ;)
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All my stories are edgy, M. I try to write sweet fluffy ones but my muse won't let me. Just when things are getting sweet and steamy... BANG, something comes along and floors everyone. They usually end up either in hospital or dead :(
ReplyDeleteWhat can I say? I love to torture my characters. If you like a character hope I don't like him too much because the more I like the more I torture.
You know that as one of my favourite characters ever is Bridge and look what I did to him :)
The emotion just tore at me. *I* want to rescue Rune but I can't. :( Guess I'll have to wait to see how you do it. You will, won't you?
ReplyDeleteMayyybeee.... Hey, just noticed that i can reply to individual comments. How long have I had this blog ??? Still learning every day
DeleteWow, very angsty, loved it. Nicely done!
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SLira/Michael Mandrake
Thhank you. Hope you like angst. There are a couple more coming up. :)
DeleteThat Rio is a complete ass! You really got my emotions going this week. Awesome work!!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
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