Here it is again. Am I the only one who thinks Wednesdays are coming round faster these days??
I'm flashing again and these were the prompts for this week
At any rate, here we go! The next prompt is: "Hit me with your best shot" or use these alternate prompts:
unicorn, mandolin, some sort of plant
or
"hit or miss"
or
"sex on the beach"
or
"I thought I knew (fill in the blank), until he/she...."
or
bartender, math, elephant
Luke had never felt so hopeless in his life. Rio had, of
course, been right. From the moment the ambulance arrived, no one had wanted to
know him. He stood in the background, feeling sick, while the paramedics did what
they had to do. It all looked so serious. And there was Rio, pretending to be
the worried husband, pushing Luke out of the way and travelling with Rune in
the ambulance, leaving him alone.
He stood in his living room for a full five minutes, un
moving. Finally snapping out of it, he grabbed his things and ran to the car.
At the hospital it was a repeat of the scenes at the house.
By the time he got there, Rune and Rio had both disappeared and enquiries at
the desk got him nowhere. As soon as they asked if he was a relative and he
said no, no one wanted to know.
Who knows what would have happened if Luke hadn’t been
recognised by the nurse who’d spoken to them earlier. She was off going off
duty and called to him, as he wandered up and down outside, trying to decide
what to do.
When she heard what had happened, she took him by the arm
and dragged him back inside, towing him through the waiting room, through some
doors and into a different waiting room.
“Wait here,” she commanded. Stunned, Luke sat down on a
chair which was slightly more comfortable than the ones in the main waiting
room. At least there were no bananas in here. He sat, with his hands hanging
between his knees and his head down, as time ticked by.
Eventually, the nurse returned with another one, a male
nurse. She said goodbye and left. The man sat down, and looked at Luke for a
while.
“You know I can’t overtly go against his husband’s wishes.
If I let you in, there’s going to be a scene and I can’t allow that.”
Luke nodded. “I know,” he whispered.
“I don’t know what’s going on between you,” the nurse said,
tightly, “but I don’t like that guy. I don’t like his attitude and I’m pretty
sure he doesn’t give a damn about your friend. It’s all for show.”
Luke looked up, anxiously.
“Yes. That’s it. He doesn’t care; not at all. All he does is hurt him.
He just doesn’t want me…” Luke paused, grinding his teeth. “He treats Rune like
a possession. He doesn’t want him but doesn’t want anyone else to have him.”
The nurse nodded, seriously. “I understand, but I still can’t
let you in when he’s there, not as long as he behaves himself and I’ve no
reason to throw him out.”
“I know,” Luke said, sadly.
“But if you wait here, I’ll keep you informed.”
“Thank you,” Luke said, his voice barely making it out. The
nurse squeezed is arm and disappeared. Luke realised he hadn’t told him
anything. He figured no news was good news. At least Rune was… He was still…
Time dragged. There was nothing to do, nothing to mark time.
Luke cursed he’d forgotten his phone, not only because he could have told the
time but because he was cut off from the outside world. There was a television
in the corner, but he couldn’t change channels. He quickly got tired of the
children’s programmes, with their over bright images and forced humour. He
turned it off when a unicorn started playing a mandolin, watched by a giant
teddy, dressed as a clown and a talking pot plant in a floppy hat.
When the door opened, Luke looked up, expecting it to be the
nurse. It wasn’t. It was Rio, but a Rio he’d never seen before. His purple hair
was standing on end, as if he’d run his hands through it, time after time. His
eyes were shadowed and his face pale. However, the one thing that really threw
Luke was the look on his face. For once, he didn’t seem to be thinking about
himself, about how he could get the advantage.
Rio stopped when he saw Luke. For a moment, he stared at
him, then nodded and sat down.
“What’s happening?” Luke asked, scared by Rio’s broken
appearance. Rio looked up, his eyes haunted.
“I’m sorry, Luke, I really am. I didn’t mean… I never meant
to hurt him, not like this.”
“What do you mean?” The dull, lifelessness in Rio’s voice
scared him even more.
“They’ve been doing all kinds of tests. I kept thinking they’d
come back and tell me he’s fine. I was expecting to… to just… I don’t know…
walk into a room and he’d be there and I’d see that look in his eyes.”
“What look? Fear?”
It said a lot that Rio ignored him, failing to take up the
fight.
“When they told me, I… I couldn’t believe it. I wouldn’t
believe it. I… I’m still thinking… hoping it’s a dream and…”
“Rio,” Luke ground out, clutching his hands tightly between
his knees to stop him putting them around Rio’s throat. “Please. Just tell me
what happened. Please, just tell me.”
Rio looked up, as if he’d forgotten he was there. “I’m not
exactly sure what… I don’t really understand. They’re still saying it’s a
concussion but… but worse than…than they thought and… and it’s made pressure
inside his head.”He faltered to a stop, biting his lip. Then his eyes snapped
up and he glared at Luke, his eyes pleading. “They said he might have brain
damage, that he might die. He can’t die. He can’t. I… I don’t know what I’d do
if… I don’t…”
Luke didn’t hear him. His world had slowed down to a stop.
‘He might die’. “No,” he whispered, sliding off the chair onto his knees. He
wasn’t a Christian and he didn’t pray, but he raised his eyes to the window and
sent a plea out into the universe. “Please don’t take him away from me.”
Now, go visit the other flashers, read their wonderful stories and COMMENT so they know how wonderful they are (not as wonderful as me of course but this is my blog and I can say what I want)
MA Church m/m
Tali m/m
Nephylim m/m
Victoria Blisse m/f
Sara York m/m
Julie Lynn Hayes m/m
Well, I think you're pretty darn wonderful, especially when you write such wrenching scenes as this. Poor Rune! :(
ReplyDeleteThank you. I really appreciate your comment
DeleteReally enjoying this series.
ReplyDeletelovely twists and turns..great emotions..
Thank you :) Emotion r us... well, me :)
DeleteYeah, wasn't expecting to see him be that bad. LOL, and I should've of!
ReplyDelete~M
Snigger. The more I like my characters the more I torture them. Poor Rune. Poor Luke, and even, Poor Rio. He's a bit lost at the moment.
DeleteLOL, you and Wicked. Prolly why I like you and your writing so much. ;)
Delete~M
giggle :) I could say pretty much the same thing about you :)
DeleteWow this is suck an amazing story! How you manage to pack so much emotion and action into these small packages, I don't know, but it works. I can't wait till next week!
ReplyDeleteThank you :) I get so excited about comments. I'm glad you're enjoying. I've already written the next couple of installments so I know where it's going and there's you won't have to wait more than a week.
DeleteOhhh can't wait to see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment. Next week's all ready and waiting. It's there in my little folder waiting for Wednesday. I hope Luke and Rio don't go completely insane with the waiting.
DeleteWonderfully intense!
ReplyDeleteThank you. Intense is certainly one word for it.
DeleteYour flashe's are always so intense, Nephylim! I hope he makes it :S:S
ReplyDeleteNicely done. Very intense story!
ReplyDeleteSlira aka Michael Mandrake
OMG, I can't believe you left him like that. SO good, so very good.
ReplyDeleteI hope I know you too well to think you'd let Rune die, but I'm on pins and needles til I find out what happens!
ReplyDeleteIf you think you know me, it shows you really don't :)Maybe I'll kill him just to prove you wrong :p
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